This week at One Deep Breath, the prompt is "Breathe".
Take a deep breath in
Feel the clean air in my lungs
Exhale the toxins.
~
With each breath I take
There is a shift within me
I blow bad air gone.
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So many toxins and pollen I'm almost afraid to inhale. lol Wonderful haiku Bella! xxoo
Posted by: Tammy | March 19, 2007 at 07:34 PM
I like to breath in and breath out the negative.
Like the thoughts.
Posted by: Brian | March 19, 2007 at 09:14 PM
mindful breathing brings the shift - *yes*. very wise words sweetie :-) xo
Posted by: susannah | March 20, 2007 at 06:13 AM
I love the first one, really I loved them both but the first one is something I recently did.
Posted by: 1blkquill | March 20, 2007 at 12:59 PM
Yes, what Susannah said... mindful breathing is the key...
Lovely haikus...
Posted by: Regina Clare Jane | March 20, 2007 at 01:54 PM
I like the idea of breathing in positive energy.
Posted by: Paris Parfait | March 20, 2007 at 02:26 PM
nice pairing
Posted by: mandy | March 20, 2007 at 02:54 PM
I love this. and may I add, I don't know how you come up with such great haikus every week.
Posted by: Irene | March 20, 2007 at 05:13 PM
The first one is something I need to consciously do each day. Great haiku.
Posted by: Sandy | March 20, 2007 at 05:50 PM
Very true words!
Posted by: Crafty Green Poet | March 21, 2007 at 04:50 AM
How I wish this was not so true...
Posted by: Star | March 21, 2007 at 05:13 PM